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  1. Posted: July 21, 2017In: Crime

    A renegade priest confesses to a detective the origin story of his uncanny ability to put “The Fear of God” into any man. (23)

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on July 23, 2017 at 11:45 am

    A man confesses to an FBI agent his family's story of how his religious fanatic father's visions led to a series of murders to destroy supposed "demons." This is the logline I'm working with from IMDB. Does this work according to loglineit rules? If not, how would you change it? (For those who haveRead more

    A man confesses to an FBI agent his family’s story of how his religious fanatic father’s visions led to a series of murders to destroy supposed “demons.”

    This is the logline I’m working with from IMDB. Does this work according to loglineit rules? If not, how would you change it? (For those who have seen the movie).

    I really need help with this. I want to get it done so I can start writing already.

    Yours sincerely

    Billy14

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  2. Posted: July 21, 2017In: Crime

    A renegade priest confesses to a detective the origin story of his uncanny ability to put “The Fear of God” into any man. (23)

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on July 22, 2017 at 11:27 am

    A fiery priest confesses to a skeptical detective the origin story of his, sometimes fatal, power to completely reform evil men The hook is when the priest is arrested in front of his congregation and dragged out of church.

    A fiery priest confesses to a skeptical detective the origin story of his, sometimes fatal, power to completely reform evil men

    The hook is when the priest is arrested in front of his congregation and dragged out of church.

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  3. Posted: July 21, 2017In: Crime

    A renegade priest confesses to a detective the origin story of his uncanny ability to put “The Fear of God” into any man. (23)

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on July 22, 2017 at 11:15 am

    A fiery priest confesses to a skeptical detective the origin story of his, sometimes deadly, power to completely reform man from his wicked ways. (24) The origin story is the A Story. The confession is the B Story. That's why I used Frailty as an example because the structure is almost identical.

    A fiery priest confesses to a skeptical detective the origin story of his, sometimes deadly, power to completely reform man from his wicked ways. (24)

    The origin story is the A Story. The confession is the B Story.

    That’s why I used Frailty as an example because the structure is almost identical.

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