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  1. Posted: July 21, 2017In: Crime

    A renegade priest confesses to a detective the origin story of his uncanny ability to put “The Fear of God” into any man. (23)

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on July 22, 2017 at 10:24 am

    Understood. I'll rework it and post here. Thanks for your help.

    Understood. I’ll rework it and post here. Thanks for your help.

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  2. Posted: June 19, 2017In: Horror

    A troubled South African teenager learns the true meaning of prayer when he confronts a TOKOLOSHE. (16)

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on June 20, 2017 at 5:39 pm

    I knew there would be that issue with the tokoloshe. So +2 words lol So, yeah, this is the story that's been driving me nuts for years now. So many things about it that I just can't get sounding right. That's why I decided to get the logline right first. There's no point in me talking more about theRead more

    I knew there would be that issue with the tokoloshe. So +2 words lol

    So, yeah, this is the story that’s been driving me nuts for years now. So many things about it that I just can’t get sounding right. That’s why I decided to get the logline right first.

    There’s no point in me talking more about the story really. I just have to get the logline right. If the logline works then I can finally start writing again and get this thing out of me. It really is killing me lol

    I’ll have a another version here soon. Thanks for the communication.

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  3. Posted: June 19, 2017In: Horror

    A troubled South African teenager learns the true meaning of prayer when he confronts a TOKOLOSHE. (16)

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on June 19, 2017 at 4:39 pm

    Ok lol This story is about a teenager who comes to a startling conclusion about prayer after he, and he alone, is tormented by a Tokoloshe. His family and school life suffer because of it. It's more of a Rites of Passage story with elements of horror.

    Ok lol

    This story is about a teenager who comes to a startling conclusion about prayer after he, and he alone, is tormented by a Tokoloshe. His family and school life suffer because of it.

    It’s more of a Rites of Passage story with elements of horror.

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