1. Posted: July 10, 2014In:

    A desperate father, forced to hijack a plane by terrorists who have his kids, must outwit the resourceful air marshall on his trail after his flight is cancelled and all the passengers are sojourned to a cheap airport hotel.

    BlakeH Penpusher

    Hi, I'd put a little less detail in the 'forced to hijack a plane' section because it feels a little irrelevant and top-heavy by the end.

    Hi, I’d put a little less detail in the ‘forced to hijack a plane’ section because it feels a little irrelevant and top-heavy by the end.

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  2. Posted: July 8, 2020In:

    When firefighters are sent out to battle a raging bushfire, an evil spy in their midst must go rouge to help stop the fire.

    BlakeH Penpusher

    Hi, I think you meant 'rogue' instead of the colour!

    Hi, I think you meant ‘rogue’ instead of the colour!

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