1. Posted: December 4, 2014In:

    When a young bride gets cold feet, her grandmother who has multiple ex-husbands is the only one who can save the day

    blublkgal

    thank you both for your feedback and questions, they are very helpful. i'll process and revise. i hope to post a revised logline soon. happy holidays!

    thank you both for your feedback and questions, they are very helpful. i’ll process and revise. i hope to post a revised logline soon.

    happy holidays!

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  2. Posted: December 4, 2014In:

    When a young bride gets cold feet, her grandmother who has multiple ex-husbands is the only one who can save the day

    blublkgal

    Thanks for your comment, Richiev. I struggled a little bit with that question because the bride seemed to be the character that goes through the most change at the end of the story. The Grandmother is definitely the lead character. Do you think I should rephrase?

    Thanks for your comment, Richiev.

    I struggled a little bit with that question because the bride seemed to be the character that goes through the most change at the end of the story. The Grandmother is definitely the lead character. Do you think I should rephrase?

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  3. Posted: December 4, 2014In:

    When a young bride gets cold feet, her grandmother who has multiple ex-husbands is the only one who can save the day

    blublkgal

    Thanks for your comment, Richiev. I struggled a little bit with that question because the bride seemed to be the character that goes through the most change at the end of the story. The Grandmother is definitely the lead character. Do you think I should rephrase?

    Thanks for your comment, Richiev.

    I struggled a little bit with that question because the bride seemed to be the character that goes through the most change at the end of the story. The Grandmother is definitely the lead character. Do you think I should rephrase?

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