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Abducted as a small child, a college athlete's sadistic mother threatens his championship hopes when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.
Would'nt it be interesting to give us a glimpse of why this discovery jeopardize his dream of succeeding as an athlete? And still I think you could nail a better adjective for your MC. Or as dpg putted it, stick with the "young man"... But it's way more straightforward than the first one. Good work!
Would’nt it be interesting to give us a glimpse of why this discovery jeopardize his dream of succeeding as an athlete? And still I think you could nail a better adjective for your MC. Or as dpg putted it, stick with the “young man”…
But it’s way more straightforward than the first one. Good work!
See lessA young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.
Yes she does retain her super power. But she can't control them anymore. Therefore when one of them shows up instinctively, it create a humorous situation and serve as a piece of the puzzle to discover that she is not an ordinary women...
Yes she does retain her super power. But she can’t control them anymore. Therefore when one of them shows up instinctively, it create a humorous situation and serve as a piece of the puzzle to discover that she is not an ordinary women…
See lessA young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.
Yes she does retain her super power. But she can't control them anymore. Therefore when one of them shows up instinctively, it create a humorous situation and serve as a piece of the puzzle to discover that she is not an ordinary women...
Yes she does retain her super power. But she can’t control them anymore. Therefore when one of them shows up instinctively, it create a humorous situation and serve as a piece of the puzzle to discover that she is not an ordinary women…
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