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  1. Posted: July 13, 2012In: 01, Public

    Two recently unemployed nerds get more than they ask for when they fake a UFO encounter to generate publicity for their start-up business.

    brandongreen2015
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 8:53 am

    Comedy/Sci-Fi

    Comedy/Sci-Fi

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  2. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    When he is rejected by the girl of his dreams, a teenager by the name of Tom Weldon must deal with the depression that follows, and the taunts of the asshole who beat her him to her.

    brandongreen2015
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 8:42 am

    I think this sounds a little passive. As an audience member, I'm not sure what type of action Tom is going to take to try to overcome this. You do say "must deal with," but I think it could benefit from a little more clarity. The whole movie won't be about him being depressed, but rather he tries toRead more

    I think this sounds a little passive. As an audience member, I’m not sure what type of action Tom is going to take to try to overcome this. You do say “must deal with,” but I think it could benefit from a little more clarity. The whole movie won’t be about him being depressed, but rather he tries to either get her back or find a new girl or whatever it may be.

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  3. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    Jesus is alive…but the Church wants him dead

    brandongreen2015
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 8:27 am

    this is great!

    this is great!

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