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  1. Posted: March 31, 2024In: Crime

    When his murderous creditors granddaughter goes missing, in electric, neon drenched Tokyo, burn out, failed private investigator Joe Horiuchi is given a week to find her to pay off a large gambling debt, and discovers deep seated corruption of politicians tied to human trafficking and the organized crime gangs running them; but when the officer helping Joe wants to arrest him, he must rediscover his purpose in life and earn the trust back of those he cares about in order to venture further down the dark rabbit hole of organized crime to unearth the source of corruption before he gets his arm cut off.

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    Added an answer on March 31, 2024 at 9:29 am

    Intriguing story! I’d watch’s series about organized crime in Japan. For a logline, see if you can capture the key ingredients (main character, catalyst, their challenge) in fewer words. Hit me with just the essence of your story - and quickly - and leave out the rest, to make me want to watch it toRead more

    Intriguing story! I’d watch’s series about organized crime in Japan.

    For a logline, see if you can capture the key ingredients (main character, catalyst, their challenge) in fewer words. Hit me with just the essence of your story – and quickly – and leave out the rest, to make me want to watch it to find out what happens.

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  2. Posted: March 6, 2024In: Romance

    When the black sleek sports car of a tall dark handsome accountant creates a sensation, he begins to find ways of taking the girl next door on a first date.

    Brian Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 28, 2024 at 8:29 am

    Right now I’m enjoying Eric Bork’s book, ‘The Idea’. There, he talks about the need for a very high-stakes, “punishing” challenge that the main character is up against throughout the entirety of the story. He talks about communicating this in the logline as well. This logline doesn’t, to me, communiRead more

    Right now I’m enjoying Eric Bork’s book, ‘The Idea’. There, he talks about the need for a very high-stakes, “punishing” challenge that the main character is up against throughout the entirety of the story. He talks about communicating this in the logline as well. This logline doesn’t, to me, communicate an all-engrossing challenge, nor is the catalyst/main event (car creating a sensation) one that would seemingly lead to one. I’m sure there’s a dramatic story of the trials of love in these characters’ lives, but I don’t feel this logline captures it.

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