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  1. Posted: February 11, 2015In: Public

    A young candle maker with hidden magic powers teams up with an aloof dragon knight to battle monsters in a dark realm while seeking to rescue her twin brother before a sinister sorcerer uses him to activate an ancient weapon.

    Britney Pringle
    Added an answer on February 11, 2015 at 10:21 am

    Hello Nir, Thank you for your feedback. I've been wrestling with getting this logline down for a while. Both twins have latent magic powers over light that get stronger throughout the story. The brother's powers just happen to manifest first, which attracts the sorcerer's attention. The knight is aRead more

    Hello Nir,

    Thank you for your feedback. I’ve been wrestling with getting this logline down for a while.

    Both twins have latent magic powers over light that get stronger throughout the story. The brother’s powers just happen to manifest first, which attracts the sorcerer’s attention.

    The knight is a dragon rider. His best friend is his dragon companion. When I used aloof, I meant to say distant as in not much of a people person, preferring the company of dragons. He is near the same age as the candle maker.

    The sorcerer is the king of the dark realm and the monsters are his minions.

    I’ll think things over a bit more and see if I can make the logline clearer.

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  2. Posted: February 11, 2015In: Public

    A young candle maker with hidden magic powers teams up with an aloof dragon knight to battle monsters in a dark realm while seeking to rescue her twin brother before a sinister sorcerer uses him to activate an ancient weapon.

    Britney Pringle
    Added an answer on February 11, 2015 at 10:21 am

    Hello Nir, Thank you for your feedback. I've been wrestling with getting this logline down for a while. Both twins have latent magic powers over light that get stronger throughout the story. The brother's powers just happen to manifest first, which attracts the sorcerer's attention. The knight is aRead more

    Hello Nir,

    Thank you for your feedback. I’ve been wrestling with getting this logline down for a while.

    Both twins have latent magic powers over light that get stronger throughout the story. The brother’s powers just happen to manifest first, which attracts the sorcerer’s attention.

    The knight is a dragon rider. His best friend is his dragon companion. When I used aloof, I meant to say distant as in not much of a people person, preferring the company of dragons. He is near the same age as the candle maker.

    The sorcerer is the king of the dark realm and the monsters are his minions.

    I’ll think things over a bit more and see if I can make the logline clearer.

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