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  1. Posted: December 13, 2014In: Public

    A 13 year old little brother had grown up around the lives of crooked cops, gangsters,corrupted politicians, a broken family, and a brother who is hated by them all. Will the little fella help his brother, abandon him, or do absolutely nothing?

    Cade
    Added an answer on December 14, 2014 at 4:22 am

    How about this? "A teenage boy who grew up in a family of criminals and corrupt politicians struggles to choose between the only life he knows and coming to the aid of his beloved older brother, a man totally opposed to the family?s values."

    How about this?

    “A teenage boy who grew up in a family of criminals and corrupt politicians struggles to choose between the only life he knows and coming to the aid of his beloved older brother, a man totally opposed to the family?s values.”

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  2. Posted: December 13, 2014In: Public

    In a city where gangs rule the streets and fight each other for food, water, shelter, guns & ammo, and territory. On the outskirts of the city is where utopias of no crime is around, but for how long? These gangsters have been treated like nothing by these politicians, who dump caviar and gold like nothing, they control the police departments, government, and the people. A group of close friends met a police officer who knew how to drive the politicians out of power, but they first had to stop their own city from tearing itself apart.

    Cade
    Added an answer on December 14, 2014 at 4:11 am

    How about boiling it down a bit. "In a futuristic dystopia, a group of young radicals and a sympathetic policeman, battle to overthrow the local power structure before the city tears itself apart".

    How about boiling it down a bit.

    “In a futuristic dystopia, a group of young radicals and a sympathetic policeman, battle to overthrow the local power structure before the city tears itself apart”.

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  3. Posted: December 13, 2014In: Public

    In a city where gangs rule the streets and fight each other for food, water, shelter, guns & ammo, and territory. On the outskirts of the city is where utopias of no crime is around, but for how long? These gangsters have been treated like nothing by these politicians, who dump caviar and gold like nothing, they control the police departments, government, and the people. A group of close friends met a police officer who knew how to drive the politicians out of power, but they first had to stop their own city from tearing itself apart.

    Cade
    Added an answer on December 14, 2014 at 4:11 am

    How about boiling it down a bit. "In a futuristic dystopia, a group of young radicals and a sympathetic policeman, battle to overthrow the local power structure before the city tears itself apart".

    How about boiling it down a bit.

    “In a futuristic dystopia, a group of young radicals and a sympathetic policeman, battle to overthrow the local power structure before the city tears itself apart”.

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