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When a recluse with a fear of animals stumble over a dog fighting ring in the woods, they have to overcome their fear of both animal and human interaction so they can team up with an animal rights activist to save the dogs.
Like it! You give a really good sense of the main character. I'm wondering if there might be a better main action then "Overcome their fear" and "Team up" What are the character actually DOING. Are they demonstrating and raise awareness, break into the cages and steals the dogs? What is happening onRead more
Like it! You give a really good sense of the main character.
See lessI’m wondering if there might be a better main action then “Overcome their fear” and “Team up” What are the character actually DOING. Are they demonstrating and raise awareness, break into the cages and steals the dogs? What is happening on the screen?
When a spell is set upon the land a young warrior must fight for her independence.
You have all the components which is great! But the logline is a bit vauge and would benefit from some clarity. What kind of spell is it? Who cast it and why? Why must the young warrior fight for her independence? Who is the young warrior and how will she fight?
You have all the components which is great! But the logline is a bit vauge and would benefit from some clarity. What kind of spell is it? Who cast it and why? Why must the young warrior fight for her independence? Who is the young warrior and how will she fight?
See lessWhen giant, man-eating plants land on the moon, a pacifist gardener must protect his moon colony.
Love the idea! By adding "pacifist" you manages do add both an obstacle to the main character and give a hint of the theme. A question when pops to mind is how the gardener is going to protect the colony, and why he is the one that must do the protecting. Since the "monsters" are plants and he's a gRead more
Love the idea! By adding “pacifist” you manages do add both an obstacle to the main character and give a hint of the theme. A question when pops to mind is how the gardener is going to protect the colony, and why he is the one that must do the protecting. Since the “monsters” are plants and he’s a gardener, wouldn’t it be interesting if he grew them instead of them landing? Maybe he tried to create a new plant that would save the colony from starving, but instead he messes up and the plants end up eating the colony instead. Just an idea.
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