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A linguist helps government to decipher an alien communication to understand their mysterious and globally alarming presence on earth.
Great job! I kind of miss the major event in the beginning of the logline instead of at the end. But it works! Also, try adding the stakes into logline, the clock ticking and/or the consequence of what happens if she doesn't succeed.
Great job! I kind of miss the major event in the beginning of the logline instead of at the end. But it works! Also, try adding the stakes into logline, the clock ticking and/or the consequence of what happens if she doesn’t succeed.
See lessWhen a petty criminal encounters a “nightcrawler”, he will stop at nothing to become the most successful nightcrawler himself. – NIGHTCRAWLER
Before I saw Nightcrawler I hadn?t heard the term before and I don?t think it?s a term that everybody knows. So maybe clarify a little what a Nightcrawler is. How will he stop at nothing? Try maybe describe a little to get the feeling of how far he actually goes.
Before I saw Nightcrawler I hadn?t heard the term before and I don?t think it?s a term that everybody knows. So maybe clarify a little what a Nightcrawler is.
How will he stop at nothing? Try maybe describe a little to get the feeling of how far he actually goes.
See lessWhen a hurricane kills a middle-aged man and his nephew, the boy?s grieving father must manage his wife?s deteriorating mental health and his company?s spiralling recession.
Try making the goal more visual. The goal ?must manage his wife?s deteriorating mental health and his company?s spiralling recession? is not something you can clearly see. How does he manage his wife?s deteriorating mental health and when has he succeeded? If you make the goal more concrete you willRead more
Try making the goal more visual. The goal ?must manage his wife?s deteriorating mental health and his company?s spiralling recession? is not something you can clearly see. How does he manage his wife?s deteriorating mental health and when has he succeeded?
If you make the goal more concrete you will have a stronger logline and also have a clear end to work against when you write the script. Don?t be afraid to spoil the end.
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