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  1. Posted: August 29, 2012In: Public

    Nearing the end of his parole and looking to put his criminal past behind him, an ex-con?s plans are derailed by the arrival of two former prison buddies, one with a bullet wound and the other with a plan to rob the local bank.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 1:31 pm

    Sounds good, Its very close to "Raising Arizona" with bullet wounds and possibly could be a serious drama or potential dark comedy. Maybe try and boil it down just a wee bit "At the end of his parole a ex-cons plans are derailed by his convict buddies, one with a bullet wound the other with plans toRead more

    Sounds good, Its very close to “Raising Arizona” with bullet wounds and possibly could be a serious drama or potential dark comedy. Maybe try and boil it down just a wee bit “At the end of his parole a ex-cons plans are derailed by his convict buddies, one with a bullet wound the other with plans to rob a local bank.” this is merely one amateur opinion of course.

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2012

    A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta;of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays about.

    callenhall
    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 12:58 pm

    Agree...how do you like "A never before told historical battle between a David and Goliath separated by vendettas and set against an elegant gambling hall and infamous brothel where heaven and hell play out.".....any better?

    Agree…how do you like “A never before told historical battle between a David and Goliath separated by vendettas and set against an elegant gambling hall and infamous brothel where heaven and hell play out.”…..any better?

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  3. Posted: July 12, 2012In: Public

    A pair of abused siblings exact revenge against their parents in an attempt to find their long lost sister whom they believe is hidden somewhere in the family home – Precious Little Things

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 12:42 pm

    This idea may have been played out, but so what! Just about everything else has been and people will always go to the movies to see the same thing over and over. I think your Log Line is great, short and to the point. A filmmaker could take this idea in several different directions i.e. comedy or hoRead more

    This idea may have been played out, but so what! Just about everything else has been and people will always go to the movies to see the same thing over and over. I think your Log Line is great, short and to the point. A filmmaker could take this idea in several different directions i.e. comedy or horror.

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