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While on his first assignment covering a string of alleged UFO abductions, a tabloid journalist stumbles on what could be the story that makes his career when he discovers Point of Interest 9 ? One of nine mysterious mansions that have sprang up across the globe over night.
Is this the logline for the pilot or the series? What you have here feels like it's either for a pilot or a season. Since this is for TV you should be selling your audience on the overall series, this is always an internal conflict, something that is almost impossible for the protagonist to resolveRead more
Is this the logline for the pilot or the series? What you have here feels like it’s either for a pilot or a season. Since this is for TV you should be selling your audience on the overall series, this is always an internal conflict, something that is almost impossible for the protagonist to resolve that can span five to seven seasons of TV. Maybe throw in an adjective for the protagonist so the audience gets a better since of who he/she is instead of just ‘tabloid journalist’.
If you look at the logline of any T.V show, the series loglines have broad goals that can span many seasons.
See lessA lonely, abused housewife falls in love with the female police officer who responds to her desperate domestic 911 call. The wife, ultimately, convinces her female lover to plot to murder the controlling, ego-maniacal husband in order for the ladies to begin a new life together.
A clear plot that just needs to be trimmed down: "A lonely, abused housewife falls in love with the female police officer who responds to her desperate 911 call. In order to start their new lives together, the women plot to kill the abusive husband."
A clear plot that just needs to be trimmed down:
See less“A lonely, abused housewife falls in love with the female police officer who responds to her desperate 911 call. In order to start their new lives together, the women plot to kill the abusive husband.”
A forgotten pop music icon stuck in the past, stages his own death to generate a spike in record sales and takes on an alias as an underground rapper to avoid an aggressive fraud detective.
Thanks for the comments. Kriss: The Protagonist is stuck mentally in the past, struggling to hold onto fame. Although a weird time travel element could spice things up! Musegetes: Thanks for the suggestions. Edit: A pop music icon stages his own death to generate record sales and takes on an alias aRead more
Thanks for the comments.
Kriss: The Protagonist is stuck mentally in the past, struggling to hold onto fame. Although a weird time travel element could spice things up!
Musegetes: Thanks for the suggestions.
Edit: A pop music icon stages his own death to generate record sales and takes on an alias an underground rapper to avoid an aggressive fraud detective.
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