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After a space piracy witness and two cops are publicly murdered, the Senior Investigator must escape from the murderer and solve the piracy case before his family or more cops are killed
After a space piracy witness - this is jumbled.? Simplify. What about the investigator would make me want to care? Who (villain) or what is standing in the way of the main character? What makes this story unique?
After a space piracy witness – this is jumbled.? Simplify. What about the investigator would make me want to care? Who (villain) or what is standing in the way of the main character? What makes this story unique?
See lessAn aging Krav Maga instructor reluctantly teams up with his estranged bounty hunter daughter to hunt down the man who raped and killed his wife.
The above is good. Protag flaw not in, but effective.? Would change the above to: After his wife is brutally raped and murdered, an aging martial arts instructor seeks redemption with the help of the daughter he abandoned years ago, who is now a bounty hunter.
The above is good. Protag flaw not in, but effective.? Would change the above to: After his wife is brutally raped and murdered, an aging martial arts instructor seeks redemption with the help of the daughter he abandoned years ago, who is now a bounty hunter.
An aging Krav Maga instructor reluctantly teams up with his estranged bounty hunter daughter to hunt down the man who raped and killed his wife.
Krav? Maga? It's karate but you have to identify for the reader what it is.? What's the risk to the hero? Good start.
Krav? Maga? It’s karate but you have to identify for the reader what it is.? What’s the risk to the hero? Good start.
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