1. Posted: June 3, 2013

    Thwarted at every attempt to win over the girl of his dreams, an awkward boy (8) has to overcome his deepest fear to draw her into a magical world.

    Carmen

    Thanks JBalmer, your logline was actually the one that did help me the most. It's simple and to the point. cheers

    Thanks JBalmer, your logline was actually the one that did help me the most. It’s simple and to the point. cheers

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2013

    Thwarted at every attempt to win over the girl of his dreams, an awkward boy (8) has to overcome his deepest fear to draw her into a magical world.

    Carmen

    Thanks Tony, you guys helped me a lot! Love the Cicada incident. I feel for you ;-) 'win' was definitely too harsh was not expressive enough. Thanks- fingers crossed!

    Thanks Tony, you guys helped me a lot! Love the Cicada incident. I feel for you 😉 ‘win’ was definitely too harsh was not expressive enough. Thanks- fingers crossed!

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