1. Posted: October 11, 2015In:

    A distrusting psychic interrogator, who steals information by entering a suspect?s mind, becomes infected by a recent suspect’s consciousness and must team up with his inner demons to stop his mind being taking over .

    Catalina Penpusher

    Very interesting, I like the fact that he has to teem up with his inner demons.

    Very interesting, I like the fact that he has to teem up with his inner demons.

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2015In:

    In the claustrophobia of a haunted flat, an immature voodoo sorcerer makes a terrible choice when he calls upon his dark gods to seek revenge for a broken heart.

    Catalina Penpusher

    Perhaps you should take out the first part about where the incident occurred, I don't think its necessary to include that. That way you can add something that will actually contribute to the plot. hope this helps :)

    Perhaps you should take out the first part about where the incident occurred, I don’t think its necessary to include that. That way you can add something that will actually contribute to the plot.

    hope this helps 🙂

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  3. Posted: July 22, 2015In:

    A blood thirty time traveller frames a pretty vampire for murder. She has to prove his guilt or she and her clan will die.

    Catalina Penpusher

    Stating that he is blood thirsty shows you what kind of character he is, I like that. But It is unnecessary to say that she is pretty.

    Stating that he is blood thirsty shows you what kind of character he is, I like that. But It is unnecessary to say that she is pretty.

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