1. Posted: April 3, 2016In:

    Dying single father on the run from his criminal past must come to grips with series of choices that led him to commit murder in order to procure a new suitable home for his young son with special needs.

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    It really is about his inner struggle to avoid becoming a criminal, fate he perceives he is destined for. Finding home for his sons is just a vehicle through which events unravel. I am having a hard time verbalizing that as there is no clear antagonist, although there is one at every choice he makesRead more

    It really is about his inner struggle to avoid becoming a criminal, fate he perceives he is destined for. Finding home for his sons is just a vehicle through which events unravel. I am having a hard time verbalizing that as there is no clear antagonist, although there is one at every choice he makes in the story. Any thoughts would be appreciated.

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2015In:

    a terminally ill man sets out to take revenge on people from his past. But to his frustration they are dying before he can get to them.

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    Maybe he must save them in order to find a cure, that would add some irony.

    Maybe he must save them in order to find a cure, that would add some irony.

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  3. Posted: August 6, 2015In:

    While trying to fix a noisy microwave, an appliance repair old man tells to his apprentice the strangest stories he witnessed in his job: a single mother hypnotized by her washing machine, an electronics hobbyist tuning a ultrablack screen TV set, a neglected housewife in love with her refrigerator.

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    Interesting, but needs conflict

    Interesting, but needs conflict

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