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After her younger sister commits suicide, a young college student becomes convinced that one of her classmates is possesed by her soul, and has to help her get to the right afterlife.
The beginning of this logline tells a story, but it doesn't give us enough information. There aren't any conflicts to make this story intriguing to me as an audience member. We don't know who the antagonist in the story is. Moreover, we must assume that it's going to be easy to help her sister - notRead more
The beginning of this logline tells a story, but it doesn’t give us enough information.
There aren’t any conflicts to make this story intriguing to me as an audience member. We don’t know who the antagonist in the story is. Moreover, we must assume that it’s going to be easy to help her sister – nothing tells us otherwise. What stands in her way? Is the process of discovering the truth a major part of the story or is it getting her to the afterlife? What is at stake if she doesn’t succeed? If she’s wrong? What is our genre?
It’s a lot of information to impart in about 30 words, but that’s a logline.
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