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  1. Posted: November 17, 2013In: Public

    A bullied kid has 1 dream: to become the next big thing in soccer. But what he doesn't know is that there will be sacrifices to make.

    Christopher Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 23, 2013 at 4:25 am

    What sacrifices? That's the question I asked myself.

    What sacrifices? That’s the question I asked myself.

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  2. Posted: November 20, 2013In: Public

    After a career-threatening injury puts back a dream of becoming one of soccer?s elite, a teenage boy must rediscover his form and prove his doubters wrong.

    Christopher Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 23, 2013 at 4:21 am

    I agree with the interest of the story, and I can see the goal. I think what can make this log line better, is stating the injury. "After being set on fire..."

    I agree with the interest of the story, and I can see the goal. I think what can make this log line better, is stating the injury. “After being set on fire…”

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2013In: Public

    A coma patient has an out of body experience, and her spirit must reach her ancestral plot to enter Heaven, before the “Slow-Walker” takes her to Hell.

    Christopher Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 27, 2013 at 1:30 pm

    How do you visualize a theme? I think that's my mistake.

    How do you visualize a theme? I think that’s my mistake.

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