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  1. Posted: March 6, 2015In: Public

    When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.

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    Added an answer on March 7, 2015 at 8:07 am

    How about this?.. In a dystopian future a mother must unite the surviving clans before showing her estranged daughter she was created by benevolent aliens to contain a prime evil force which is taking over the minds of the remaining inhabitants.

    How about this?..

    In a dystopian future a mother must unite the surviving clans before showing her estranged daughter she was created by benevolent aliens to contain a prime evil force which is taking over the minds of the remaining inhabitants.

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  2. Posted: March 6, 2015In: Public

    When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2015 at 7:09 pm

    Thanks guys working on it now. I have taken all these pointers into consideration. Loglines are not one of my fortes and really appreciate it!

    Thanks guys working on it now. I have taken all these pointers into consideration. Loglines are not one of my fortes and really appreciate it!

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  3. Posted: March 6, 2015In: Public

    When a woman and her newborn are placed into quarantine, feared they are infected by the darkness which has devastated their homeworld. She escapes and gains the support of followers to free her twisted child from the prime evil which is bent on possessing their entire species.

    Chris Wells
    Added an answer on March 6, 2015 at 5:03 pm

    Great Lucius. Thanks for the feedback. I'm afraid by disclosing the details you point out it will be giving away too much of the film. Plus it is already very word heavy as far as loglines go for room to explain much more. If its raising questions then that's sparking interest to get people to wantRead more

    Great Lucius. Thanks for the feedback. I’m afraid by disclosing the details you point out it will be giving away too much of the film. Plus it is already very word heavy as far as loglines go for room to explain much more. If its raising questions then that’s sparking interest to get people to want to watch the film isn’t it?

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