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  1. Posted: April 15, 2012In: Public

    As a series of devastating terrorist attacks are waged on American soil and the citizens of a nation in shock looks to their Government for reassurance, word publicly gets out that one of the embedded terrorists is negotiating a defection directly with the President's wife in return for the violence to stop.

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    Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 4:48 am

    Whose the protagonist and whose the antagonist in this film? It seems that your logline is centered on time and place more than people, try centering it on the people involved and their conflicts with each other. Let the war drift to the background as it is the setting. Is there anything ironic to tRead more

    Whose the protagonist and whose the antagonist in this film? It seems that your logline is centered on time and place more than people, try centering it on the people involved and their conflicts with each other. Let the war drift to the background as it is the setting. Is there anything ironic to the conflict, like is the terrorist an American who was once friends with the president (if he is the protagonist)?

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  2. Posted: July 12, 2012In: Public

    After a young archeologist discovers an ancient tablet, a group of immortal assassins hunt him down. The Guardian stands in their way.

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    Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 4:13 am

    Pretty good, my only suggestion is even more description (Ex. ancient sumerian tablet) and fit in where it takes place as that will help paint a picture as well. Also, what's the Guardian? Is he the protector of the ancient secrets?

    Pretty good, my only suggestion is even more description (Ex. ancient sumerian tablet) and fit in where it takes place as that will help paint a picture as well. Also, what’s the Guardian? Is he the protector of the ancient secrets?

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