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  1. Posted: May 16, 2019In: Thriller

    A successful, married spends a night with a woman during a business trip, only to wake up mugged, a few days later the woman is a candidate in a job interview conducted by him and his wife.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on May 16, 2019 at 12:50 pm

    What?s the conflict throughout this movie? Is the woman-theif now blackmailing the man for a job? What?s the job?

    What?s the conflict throughout this movie? Is the woman-theif now blackmailing the man for a job? What?s the job?

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  2. Posted: May 14, 2019In: Comedy

    When a commuters’ activist group throws the bar car onto the tracks, lonely office drone Donald Brewster and his boozy compatriot patrons must make a case for saving the raucous rail-car or risk losing their home-on-the-way-home.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on May 15, 2019 at 9:08 am

    I definitely like the premise of this movie as someone who used the cafe car on an Amtrak for my commute regularly. You can have a lot of characters from different walks of life in one location that?s cheap to shoot. My concern is with obtaining the goal here. So they want to save their boozing car,Read more

    I definitely like the premise of this movie as someone who used the cafe car on an Amtrak for my commute regularly. You can have a lot of characters from different walks of life in one location that?s cheap to shoot.

    My concern is with obtaining the goal here. So they want to save their boozing car, but how do they do that with action that can sustain a movie? Ie, How do they ?make a case.? Write letters to Amtrak? No action there. Stage a sit in? Doesn?t really seem credible, and what are they really risking? I think you need to focus on what they are going to do.

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  3. Posted: May 12, 2019In: Horror

    When a crew of mismatched oilfield workers stay late to finish a job in the middle of nowhere, they are attacked by bloodthirsty monsters. They’ll have to band together to fight through blood guts, and teeth if they want to live to see another sunrise.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on May 12, 2019 at 3:15 pm

    I?m not sure if this is still in development phase but for fun here?s how I?d write it thinking of it as a Liam Neeson/Gerard Butler etc vehicle. ?A suicidal oilrigger reluctantly takes one last shift to fix a malfunctioning sensor off the Coast of X, only to find there?s no malfunction. There are (Read more

    I?m not sure if this is still in development phase but for fun here?s how I?d write it thinking of it as a Liam Neeson/Gerard Butler etc vehicle.

    ?A suicidal oilrigger reluctantly takes one last shift to fix a malfunctioning sensor off the Coast of X, only to find there?s no malfunction. There are (X in the water/air/pipes/water ever). ?

    This is basically The Grey where the monsters are Wolves – one of my favorite man vs beast.

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