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  1. Posted: April 13, 2012In: Public

    In 1955, a young Debutante is sole witness to murder and must enlist the help of another criminal, his niece, to help her get to safety. But the killer is on their trail and he?ll stop at nothing to silence them.

    ClaireYeowart
    Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 10:14 pm

    The niece of the killer, sorry I worded it all wrong.

    The niece of the killer, sorry I worded it all wrong.

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  2. Posted: April 13, 2012In: Public

    In 1955, a young Debutante is sole witness to murder and must enlist the help of another criminal, his niece, to help her get to safety. But the killer is on their trail and he?ll stop at nothing to silence them.

    ClaireYeowart
    Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 10:12 pm

    I realise I've worded it incorrectly. It's meant to read... In 1955, a young Debutante is sole witness to murder orchestrated by London's most ruthless crime boss. She must enlist the help of another criminal, his niece, to help her get to safety. But the killer is on their trail and he?ll stop at nRead more

    I realise I’ve worded it incorrectly. It’s meant to read…

    In 1955, a young Debutante is sole witness to murder orchestrated by London’s most ruthless crime boss. She must enlist the help of another criminal, his niece, to help her get to safety. But the killer is on their trail and he?ll stop at nothing to silence them.

    But that sounds too long winded. It was originally:

    A young Debutante must enlist the help of a criminal Teddy girl to get her to safety after she is sole witness to a murder orchestrated by London’s most ruthless crime boss.

    But this is a bit lack luster.

    The 1955 part is essential to the story. It’s about a Teddy Girl and a Debutante and Teddy Girls/Boys were only part of the 1950s/60s and Debutantes aren’t really Debutantes in England anymore.

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  3. Posted: April 10, 2012In: Public

    A POW interned at a Japanese camp in World War II finds an unlikely alley in a heroic dog who helps him through hardship, before a daring escape attempt places man and dog in an even bigger fight for survival.

    ClaireYeowart
    Added an answer on April 10, 2012 at 2:36 pm

    Thanks for your thoughts GregLucM!

    Thanks for your thoughts GregLucM!

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