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  1. Posted: July 30, 2012In: Public

    A Brilliant but reckless mechanic promises his dying brother that he will save the one girl who can cure a zombie-plague before the military kill her.

    Clint Pittenger
    Added an answer on July 31, 2012 at 9:11 am

    I agree with djmc about the military killing her. Maybe re-word it so it discusses the conflict between her and the military. This is just me tweaking the logline around, and you don't have to use it. I was just giving a brief example, and it could be a bad example but we want to know why the militaRead more

    I agree with djmc about the military killing her. Maybe re-word it so it discusses the conflict between her and the military. This is just me tweaking the logline around, and you don’t have to use it. I was just giving a brief example, and it could be a bad example but we want to know why the military wants her dead.

    A Brilliant but reckless mechanic promises his dying brother he will save the one girl who can cure a zombie-plague, before the military executes her for being the cause of the end of humanity.

    Its a great idea…!

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  2. Posted: July 29, 2012In: Public

    A FATHER goes searching for his missing son, and his friend, FRANK house sits, hoping the son will come home, unaware, someone is already there with him.

    Clint Pittenger
    Added an answer on July 31, 2012 at 8:55 am

    Its not lame... I worked on it, and I think I have it now.

    Its not lame… I worked on it, and I think I have it now.

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