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  1. Posted: July 13, 2012In: 01, Public

    Two recently unemployed nerds get more than they ask for when they fake a UFO encounter to generate publicity for their start-up business.

    colinhuangrb
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 2:16 pm

    I think this is a really good logline as it really pulls people in. However, maybe you would like to add more about what business they are in that would require publicity with UFOs? It might paint a clearer image about the film while not giving away too much of the plot

    I think this is a really good logline as it really pulls people in. However, maybe you would like to add more about what business they are in that would require publicity with UFOs? It might paint a clearer image about the film while not giving away too much of the plot

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  2. Posted: July 13, 2012In: Public

    A man with alzheimer disease, is wanted by his family while he is lost in the city.

    colinhuangrb
    Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 1:58 pm

    Having just watched 'A Separation' recently, is the old man the main character? If he is, how does the audience relate and emote to him? What are the conflicts that the family will face? Could make for an emotional story :)

    Having just watched ‘A Separation’ recently, is the old man the main character? If he is, how does the audience relate and emote to him?

    What are the conflicts that the family will face?

    Could make for an emotional story 🙂

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