1. Posted: January 29, 2013In:

    When Arthur goes to work in the front yard to escape his wife?s nagging, he accidentally walks into a ?best yard? contest with his neighbor.

    CoreyLane

    Thanks a bunch! Let me fiddle with it a bit...

    Thanks a bunch! Let me fiddle with it a bit…

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  2. Posted: January 1, 2013In:

    After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers before the victims go bankrupt.

    CoreyLane

    Thanks for the comment and I see where you are coming from with the deadline insert but the logline is rather lengthy as it is. But....let's give it a shot. "After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Young has 72 hours to stop the hackers before the victims go bankruptRead more

    Thanks for the comment and I see where you are coming from with the deadline insert but the logline is rather lengthy as it is. But….let’s give it a shot.

    “After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Young has 72 hours to stop the hackers before the victims go bankrupt.”

    ..yes?….no?

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  3. Posted: January 1, 2013In:

    After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers before the victims go bankrupt.

    CoreyLane

    Thanks Richiev! I don't think that the story in general would change all that much but the POV has changed completely.

    Thanks Richiev! I don’t think that the story in general would change all that much but the POV has changed completely.

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