1. Posted: August 28, 2015In:

    When the first time travel ship crash lands in the prehistoric era, the crew have 3 days to fix the ship before the asteroid that wiped out the dinosaurs strikes ? exactly where they are stranded.

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    I think it is too much of a buzz word, i would try to put something more original - like "intelligent and self controlled asteroid" again only my opinion :)

    I think it is too much of a buzz word, i would try to put something more original – like “intelligent and self controlled asteroid” again only my opinion 🙂

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  2. Posted: August 28, 2015In:

    When the first time travel ship crash lands in the prehistoric era, the crew have 3 days to fix the ship before the asteroid that wiped out the dinosaurs strikes ? exactly where they are stranded.

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    I'm not an expert, but would remove the dinosaurs. OMO

    I’m not an expert, but would remove the dinosaurs. OMO

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2015In:

    An art forgery expert is set on an involuntary adventure that promises to solve an old crime and reveal the secret of her vanished family, all this after a mysterious man delivers an unusual package to her apartment.

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    Thank you again !!!! It really helps. I changed the log line to: "A young women goes to Siberia to search for a missing treasure and her vanished family after a man leaves the diary of her long lost brother at her apartment."

    Thank you again !!!! It really helps. I changed the log line to:
    “A young women goes to Siberia to search for a missing treasure and her vanished family after a man leaves the diary of her long lost brother at her apartment.”

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