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  1. Posted: September 27, 2015In: Thriller

    A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, insisting he has proof that one of them is a government agent.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 27, 2015 at 9:42 am

    I'd put it in term of action. A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, by convince the group their is a traitor in their ranks. saying insisting doesn't show the impact on the group.

    I’d put it in term of action.

    A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, by convince the group their is a traitor in their ranks.

    saying insisting doesn’t show the impact on the group.

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  2. Posted: September 11, 2015In: Public

    To solve the puzzle of her family disappearance, a fraud investigator must find out the truth about her father who masterminded an international criminal heist

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 13, 2015 at 12:25 pm

    Time to start dropping words. "To fit together the pieces of a...." Could be "To solve..." Dissidence isn't really needed, in my opinion. The puzzle isn't a character, so you don't really need to give much depth.

    Time to start dropping words. “To fit together the pieces of a….” Could be “To solve…”

    Dissidence isn’t really needed, in my opinion. The puzzle isn’t a character, so you don’t really need to give much depth.

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