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When career tramps, a yachtsman and an ex-actress team up swindling the jet set, revenge threatens when his ex-wife arrives working undercover for the IRS
The issue I have is the world Tramp. I find a disconnect between that and the Jetset. A tramp I see as a homeless person, no money to maintain appearances and wouldn't get close enough to the Jetset to con them. Is there a better word that isn't as contradicting and would paint a better image. PerhaRead more
The issue I have is the world Tramp. I find a disconnect between that and the Jetset. A tramp I see as a homeless person, no money to maintain appearances and wouldn’t get close enough to the Jetset to con them.
Is there a better word that isn’t as contradicting and would paint a better image. Perhaps your story does have them as down and out.
See lessA teenage Jewish boy Harles in a Nazi death camp sets out to prove his love to Hitler’s daughter Ida who once pretended to be Jewish.
Just drop the names and you have a solid logline. The tradition is no names. Putting them makes your line feel strange and unpolished. They aren't needed at all, as they have no impact on the story, which is the logline function, to show story.
Just drop the names and you have a solid logline. The tradition is no names. Putting them makes your line feel strange and unpolished. They aren’t needed at all, as they have no impact on the story, which is the logline function, to show story.
See lessWhen his wife becomes a Christian, a devout atheist who believes in truth, uses his journalistic skills to prove Jesus was a myth
I'd just drop "who believes in the truth". Then you have room for the fall out. "Ending his marriage in the process" etc
I’d just drop “who believes in the truth”. Then you have room for the fall out. “Ending his marriage in the process” etc
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