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A struggling businessman has his world upended when a train explosion leaves him wounded in an untamed jungle. He'll have to survive the elements, the wildlife and a forgotten tribe if he ever wants to see his family again.
I think you can sharpen it. Drag out some words to make it shorter. This will give it a greater feel of action. Make it more current "He will have to" can be "He has to", which can give it a sense of immediacy. It is a good logline, I know what the movie is by what you have written.
I think you can sharpen it. Drag out some words to make it shorter. This will give it a greater feel of action. Make it more current “He will have to” can be “He has to”, which can give it a sense of immediacy.
It is a good logline, I know what the movie is by what you have written.
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