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  1. Posted: December 24, 2017In: Fantasy

    A Rescue Story

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 25, 2017 at 8:27 pm

    There is an opportunity for a ?but?. At the end think of adding a complication from your story. ... but soon discovers he needs the help of others to succeed. Probably not your story. But you get the point.

    There is an opportunity for a ?but?.

    At the end think of adding a complication from your story.

    … but soon discovers he needs the help of others to succeed.

    Probably not your story. But you get the point.

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  2. Posted: December 21, 2017In: Action

    A paraplegic marine accepts robotic limbs in order to take down the Artificial Intelligence company responsible for murdering his family.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 21, 2017 at 5:22 pm

    The only thing I think you need is what does he do to take them down? ?Just a few words. Or give us a paragraph and we'll see what we can hammer out.

    The only thing I think you need is what does he do to take them down? ?Just a few words. Or give us a paragraph and we’ll see what we can hammer out.

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  3. Posted: December 21, 2017In: Action

    After a horrific injury during a compromised operation, CIA agent Lucas must use his new enhancements to find the leak within the agency, whilst a terrorist organization threatens to conduct a series of attacks across several major cities.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 21, 2017 at 2:24 pm

    A cyborgnetically enhanced CIA agent must find the leak in his agency to prevent a series of terrorist attacks. You can flesh it up if you like. Finding a leak feels a bit passive. A cyborgnetically enhanced CIA agent must prevent a series of terrorist attacks while trying uncover the leak that is hRead more

    A cyborgnetically enhanced CIA agent must find the leak in his agency to prevent a series of terrorist attacks.

    You can flesh it up if you like. Finding a leak feels a bit passive.

    A cyborgnetically enhanced CIA agent must prevent a series of terrorist attacks while trying uncover the leak that is helping the terrorists.

    Now it about the action and the leak is the B story.

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