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  1. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    After his family is kidnapped and sold to English slavers by renegade Fante tribesmen, Ashanti tribal warrior Mwabo embarks on a perilous voyage across the Atlantic to the sugarcane plantations of modern day Jamaica in search of his wife and son, where he leads a slave rebellion against the tyrannical white masters to reclaim his family's freedom and liberate his fellow Africans from the misery of enslavement.

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    Added an answer on March 15, 2015 at 10:37 am

    Thanks for the replies. The story is set around the year 1656 which is when the English have established a base at Fort Cormantine (Ghana) and also just after the English have taken Jamaica from the Spanish. Whilst the story and characters are fictional, the general gist is historical fact. The protRead more

    Thanks for the replies. The story is set around the year 1656 which is when the English have established a base at Fort Cormantine (Ghana) and also just after the English have taken Jamaica from the Spanish. Whilst the story and characters are fictional, the general gist is historical fact.

    The protagonist’s main goal is to free his family and fellow villagers from the slavers, but after witnessing the brutality his people experienced at the hands of the English, his goal broadens to freeing all the slaves at the two main plantations mentioned in the story, and the way he achieves this is by triggering a rebellion.

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    After his family is kidnapped and sold to English slavers by renegade Fante tribesmen, Ashanti tribal warrior Mwabo embarks on a perilous voyage across the Atlantic to the sugarcane plantations of modern day Jamaica in search of his wife and son, where he leads a slave rebellion against the tyrannical white masters to reclaim his family's freedom and liberate his fellow Africans from the misery of enslavement.

    creative_minds
    Added an answer on March 14, 2015 at 7:44 pm

    Appreciate the reply Rutger, thank you. Does a logline typically have a word limit? Is a two sentence logline acceptable? In order to trim it down, how about something along the lines of "An Ashanti tribal warrior embarks on a perilous journey across the Atlantic to a sugarcane plantation where he lRead more

    Appreciate the reply Rutger, thank you. Does a logline typically have a word limit? Is a two sentence logline acceptable?

    In order to trim it down, how about something along the lines of “An Ashanti tribal warrior embarks on a perilous journey across the Atlantic to a sugarcane plantation where he leads a rebellion to free his kidnapped family and fellow Africans from the brutality of English slavers”.

    The plan for this script is a 3 hour epic feature film, not a mini series.

    Thanks for your assistance.

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  3. Posted: March 11, 2015In: Public

    After a series of strange events, a young woman concludes that she is a witch with magical powers. Against her will , her family pushes her to undergo psychiatric treatment.

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    Added an answer on March 14, 2015 at 3:59 pm

    Doesn't really sound like a gripping story. You could do something better with the witchery aspect rather than have the young woman undergo psychiatric treatment. Perhaps she could use her powers to become a vigilante of sorts or seek revenge on those who bullied her at school and made her adolescenRead more

    Doesn’t really sound like a gripping story. You could do something better with the witchery aspect rather than have the young woman undergo psychiatric treatment. Perhaps she could use her powers to become a vigilante of sorts or seek revenge on those who bullied her at school and made her adolescent years miserable.

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