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  1. Posted: May 29, 2012In: Public

    Paranoid Harry, a shell-shocked lieutenant, is sent to stop a general gone mad, commanding a nuclear missile silo, before he starts world war 3.

    cubitfox
    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 7:02 am

    I immediately thought Dr. Strangelove on steroids. I'm not sure if that's good or bad. It seems the idea is contingent upon Paranoid Harry being a brilliant character, because its so forceful in the logline.

    I immediately thought Dr. Strangelove on steroids. I’m not sure if that’s good or bad. It seems the idea is contingent upon Paranoid Harry being a brilliant character, because its so forceful in the logline.

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  2. Posted: May 30, 2012In: Public

    When a prototype super-soldier goes rogue, he struggles to make his way home before the U.S. Army closes in and reclaims its property.

    cubitfox
    Added an answer on May 30, 2012 at 6:59 am

    It's worded really well, but there's nothing in the logline that immediately makes it unique. We get the character, the conflict and the genre, but nothing that really pulls me into wanting to find out more about the script. Find that unique element and work it in there.

    It’s worded really well, but there’s nothing in the logline that immediately makes it unique. We get the character, the conflict and the genre, but nothing that really pulls me into wanting to find out more about the script. Find that unique element and work it in there.

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