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Slated for Banishment on her sixteenth birthday, a young warrior must elude capture, rescue her best friend and hope her own twist doesn?t mutate further in the process. If they do manage to escape, Keira will have to face her nightmares, the creatures of a world twisted by the DNA Wars, and survive long enough to reach the City of Lights where she will be free from persecution.
I think it is a little long too. Great ideas but they need streamlined.Maybe it should read something like:" A futuristic?warrior princess has 24 hours to escape the DNA wars before she mutates into something other than herself"I don't know for sure ;) That was very quick but I hope it shows you howRead more
I think it is a little long too. Great ideas but they need streamlined.
Maybe it should read something like:
” A futuristic?warrior princess has 24 hours to escape the DNA wars before she mutates into something other than herself”
I don’t know for sure 😉 That was very quick but I hope it shows you how it could be streamlined.
A simple formula moving forward might be – “Archetype must action/goal or else to ?express theme.”
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