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  1. Posted: August 25, 2015In: Public

    On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.

    DaddyBear Mark
    Added an answer on August 25, 2015 at 5:18 am

    Really? It's not implied that the uncles are the ones celebrating and that they being two men are in fact a Gay couple? Is it necessary to point out such an obvious detail?

    Really? It’s not implied that the uncles are the ones celebrating and that they being two men are in fact a Gay couple? Is it necessary to point out such an obvious detail?

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  2. Posted: August 25, 2015In: Public

    On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.

    DaddyBear Mark
    Added an answer on August 25, 2015 at 5:04 am

    Hmmm....incudung all that, wouldn't that make it more of a synopsis than a logline? On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew. Something like this perhaps?

    Hmmm….incudung all that, wouldn’t that make it more of a synopsis than a logline?

    On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.

    Something like this perhaps?

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  3. Posted: August 22, 2015In: Public

    After gaining superpowers, a group of clumsy and incompetent young adults set out to become the world?s first supervillains, but must first gain control over their city from the corrupt, but powerful superheroes who protect it.

    DaddyBear Mark
    Added an answer on August 25, 2015 at 4:52 am

    Interesting idea, but not sure I can follow the story from your logline. Seems a bit confusing to have two sets of bad guys as it were....all be it one set not as bad as the other.

    Interesting idea, but not sure I can follow the story from your logline. Seems a bit confusing to have two sets of bad guys as it were….all be it one set not as bad as the other.

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