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When his Time Machine gets stolen, the time-traveler that runs away from responsibility must stop his mad-with-power best friend from ruling time and space, and save the world.
That fact that the thief is his best friend may be important for the turns, but is it really important now? Good points above about shortening the descriptions. Possible rewrite: When a irresponsible time-traveller discovers his time-machine has been stolen, he must stop the megalomaniacal thief froRead more
That fact that the thief is his best friend may be important for the turns, but is it really important now?
Good points above about shortening the descriptions. Possible rewrite:
When a irresponsible time-traveller discovers his time-machine has been stolen, he must stop the megalomaniacal thief from using it to take over the world?
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