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the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.
cool concept, however i would make it clear the novice priest is the protagonist.. "... a novice priest must avoid corruption when the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form and wage for his soul".
cool concept, however i would make it clear the novice priest is the protagonist.. “… a novice priest must avoid corruption when the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form and wage for his soul”.
See lessA solitary man unable to sleep for 15 years survives by recording everything he sees and playing it back to differentiate between reality and hallucinations, until he becomes the only witness of a multi million dollar crime and every single person wants to alter his reality.
It is a sci fic in terms that the condition is nonexistent. its a medical trial gone wrong, this person survives thorough a lot of medications and isolation from the world. now his brain has had too many toxins and his only chance for survival is to go into an induced coma and let the brain "heal".Read more
It is a sci fic in terms that the condition is nonexistent. its a medical trial gone wrong, this person survives thorough a lot of medications and isolation from the world. now his brain has had too many toxins and his only chance for survival is to go into an induced coma and let the brain “heal”. But afraid of going insane while he dreams in a coma state, he sets out to fabricate the perfect happy dream, by following and recording a woman who he has fallen in love with, and playing back her videos over and over. However while stalking her he becomes the only witness of _insert crime_, When before she rejected him as a psycho, now she seduces him and starts editing his footage, which until now has been the only connection to reality that he could trust. He is on a race against sanity and his brain switching off, and he needs to fabricate his dream before it turns into a long nightmare.
— i understand there is a lot of things at play, this log line exercise has been really interesting and thank you all for the feedback. I’ll keep working on it 🙂
See lessA solitary man unable to sleep for 15 years survives by recording everything he sees and playing it back to differentiate between reality and hallucinations, until he becomes the only witness of a multi million dollar crime and every single person wants to alter his reality.
Thanks guys, How about this? When a man with narcolepsy who struggles to tell reality from hallucinations witnesses a bank heist, he must remain sane as the thief seduces him trying to alter the evidence that resides deep in his mind.
Thanks guys, How about this?
When a man with narcolepsy who struggles to tell reality from hallucinations witnesses a bank heist, he must remain sane as the thief seduces him trying to alter the evidence that resides deep in his mind.
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