1. Posted: February 17, 2015In:

    In a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities history must stop an evil corporation from enslaving the masses with its latest device.

    Davron Penpusher

    Thanks heaps again Craig, you seem to be a shining light in this logline writing process. I get what you mean about the device, fresh eyes really do help. This does sound much better, In a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanitiRead more

    Thanks heaps again Craig, you seem to be a shining light in this logline writing process. I get what you mean about the device, fresh eyes really do help.

    This does sound much better,

    In a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities history must stop an evil corporation from using its latest device to enslave the masses.

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  2. Posted: February 13, 2015In:

    A mysterious boy is on the run after having his identity discovered. But will he escape from the prospect of the hunters chasing him every second.

    Davron Penpusher

    This is an interesting idea, needs to be a bit clearer with what is going to happen, also needs something fresh that'll make it stand out.

    This is an interesting idea, needs to be a bit clearer with what is going to happen, also needs something fresh that’ll make it stand out.

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  3. Posted: February 13, 2015In:

    A mysterious boy is on the run after having his identity discovered. But will he escape from the prospect of the hunters chasing him every second.

    Davron Penpusher

    This is an interesting idea, needs to be a bit clearer with what is going to happen, also needs something fresh that'll make it stand out.

    This is an interesting idea, needs to be a bit clearer with what is going to happen, also needs something fresh that’ll make it stand out.

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