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  1. Posted: August 28, 2012In: Public

    When an amenable young man gets cold feet on the eve of his wedding, he incurs the wrath of his jilted bride's unhinged family and is forced to literally fight for his freedom.

    deano
    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 1:11 am

    Thank you for your reply! I also wondered about the word ?amenable?, it was between that and ?spineless?. Maybe ?spineless? works better? To give you some background on my script, the protagonist lives in a small town, is sheltered (by his over-bearing mother), submissive (to his narcissistic fianceRead more

    Thank you for your reply! I also wondered about the word ?amenable?, it was between that and ?spineless?. Maybe ?spineless? works better? To give you some background on my script, the protagonist lives in a small town, is sheltered (by his over-bearing mother), submissive (to his narcissistic fiance) and intimidated (by his red-neck in-laws). What he really wants to do is travel and enjoy life before he settles down. Instead of voicing this desire, our protagonist leaves his bride-zilla at the alter and tries to skip town (thus incurring her family?s wrath). In the end, he learns to stop running and stand up for himself (by having a Hot Fuzz style shoot out, naturally!) The final scene sees our hero wandering the streets of Paris having the time of his life.

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  2. Posted: August 28, 2012In: Public

    When an amenable young man gets cold feet on the eve of his wedding, he incurs the wrath of his jilted bride's unhinged family and is forced to literally fight for his freedom.

    deano
    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 1:10 am

    Thank you for your reply! I also wondered about the word 'amenable', it was between that and 'spineless'. Maybe 'spineless' works better? To give you some background on my script, the protagonist lives in a small town, is sheltered (by his over-bearing mother), submissive (to his narcissistic fianceRead more

    Thank you for your reply! I also wondered about the word ‘amenable’, it was between that and ‘spineless’. Maybe ‘spineless’ works better? To give you some background on my script, the protagonist lives in a small town, is sheltered (by his over-bearing mother), submissive (to his narcissistic fiance) and intimidated (by his red-neck in-laws). What he really wants to do is travel and enjoy life before he settles down. Instead of voicing this desire, our protagonist leaves his bride-zilla at the alter and tries to skip town (thus incurring her family’s wrath). In the end, he learns to stop running and stand up for himself (by having a Hot Fuzz style shoot out, naturally!) The final scene sees our hero wandering the streets of Paris having the time of his life.

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  3. Posted: August 28, 2012In: Public

    When an amenable young man gets cold feet on the eve of his wedding, he incurs the wrath of his jilted bride's unhinged family and is forced to literally fight for his freedom.

    deano
    Added an answer on August 29, 2012 at 11:40 pm

    Yes, it's an action/comedy and the violence leans more towards slapstick, ie. the hero gets into a Jackie Chan/Rush Hour style martial arts fight with his groomsmen. You could be right about adding/changing some keywords to really hammer home the tone of the script though. Thanks for the comments!

    Yes, it’s an action/comedy and the violence leans more towards slapstick, ie. the hero gets into a Jackie Chan/Rush Hour style martial arts fight with his groomsmen. You could be right about adding/changing some keywords to really hammer home the tone of the script though. Thanks for the comments!

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