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  1. Posted: August 5, 2012In: Public

    Death has been conquered, adrenalin drained at the point of death creates the immortality pill used by the rich and privalged. God sickened by the murder of innocents unleashes his wraith on the immortals.

    dexter7176
    Added an answer on August 9, 2012 at 7:17 pm

    Hi I have updated the protaginist in a new logline, thanks for the tips.

    Hi I have updated the protaginist in a new logline, thanks for the tips.

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  2. Posted: August 5, 2012In: Public

    Death has been conquered, adrenalin drained at the point of death creates the immortality pill used by the rich and privalged. God sickened by the murder of innocents unleashes his wraith on the immortals.

    dexter7176
    Added an answer on August 9, 2012 at 7:06 pm

    Hi some great advice here, the initial logline was really just a thought I had while looking around on this site. I have updated the logline to this: "Resurrected by god, a lone soldier with unearthly powers must find and destroy the ultimate evil behind the immortality pill before humanity is destrRead more

    Hi some great advice here, the initial logline was really just a thought I had while looking around on this site. I have updated the logline to this:

    “Resurrected by god, a lone soldier with unearthly powers must find and destroy the ultimate evil behind the immortality pill before humanity is destroyed forever.”

    The basic idea is that there are prison camps where the vulnerable are tortured until there souls are released, they are then used for the immortality pill. The rich, privileged etc use the pill to live forever, the knock on effect is nobody goes to heaven. God is angered by this new world order and resurrects a lone soldier to restore the balance using his unearthly powers god has granted him. Satan is the big bad guy who has actually created hell on earth, innocents killed while the greedy evil types are granted immortality.
    What do you think?

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  3. Posted: May 14, 2012In: Public

    When every tree, flower and shrub on Earth uproots itself, ascends into space, and forms a gigantic forest-like sphere, an arrogant but gifted space captain and his crew must fly an introverted boy who speaks \"plant\" through its dangerous caverns to its centre, to plead for the return of all plant-life before humanity starves to death.

    dexter7176
    Added an answer on July 15, 2012 at 5:11 am

    This is a great idea I hope you write it.

    This is a great idea I hope you write it.

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