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A night club owner struggles to control her newfound powers while she battles interdimensional beings who seek to tear a hole in the fabric between our world and theirs.
Thanks for your comments. I went with "struggles to control" because the powers are difficult to control like Jean Grey struggling with the Phoenix powers in X-Men. She can manipulate life energy: chi, prana, etc. Her own and those of others. To heal or to destroy. The interdimensional beings also hRead more
Thanks for your comments. I went with “struggles to control” because the powers are difficult to control like Jean Grey struggling with the Phoenix powers in X-Men. She can manipulate life energy: chi, prana, etc. Her own and those of others. To heal or to destroy. The interdimensional beings also have this power, but they have mastered it.
I had played with this idea:
A night club owner struggles to control her newfound powers while she battles beings who seek to use those powers to tear a hole in the fabric between our world and theirs, allowing them to pass onto our world to wreck havoc as they did in ancient times.
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How about?: On the night of a ferocious windstorm, a headstrong engineer encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever. There shouldn't be much exposition in the logline. You kind of want to get to the heart of the story and entice the reader of the lRead more
How about?:
On the night of a ferocious windstorm, a headstrong engineer encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
There shouldn’t be much exposition in the logline. You kind of want to get to the heart of the story and entice the reader of the logline enough to read your story. Think of it as your elevator pitch. The more visual imagery, emotion, and action it has packed into it, the better it does its job.
See lessSophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
How about?: On the night of a ferocious windstorm, a headstrong engineer encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever. There shouldn't be much exposition in the logline. You kind of want to get to the heart of the story and entice the reader of the lRead more
How about?:
On the night of a ferocious windstorm, a headstrong engineer encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
There shouldn’t be much exposition in the logline. You kind of want to get to the heart of the story and entice the reader of the logline enough to read your story. Think of it as your elevator pitch. The more visual imagery, emotion, and action it has packed into it, the better it does its job.
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