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While escaping a terrorist attack , two biggest female business rivals discover that they are homosexual . For the world they can’t stay together and for them they can’t live apart.
?While escaping a terrorist attack , two biggest female business rivals discover that they are homosexual . For the world they can?t stay together and for them they can?t live apart.? I think you have a story here just not a compelling understandable LogLine. I would start by changing some of the woRead more
?While escaping a terrorist attack , two biggest female business rivals discover that they are homosexual . For the world they can?t stay together and for them they can?t live apart.?
I think you have a story here just not a compelling understandable LogLine. I would start by changing some of the wording; “two biggest female business rivals”doesn’t exactly roll off the tongue. I love “For the world they can?t stay together and for them they can?t live apart”, but it needs to be reserved for the back of the book, the extended version of Your LogLine if you will, I love line needs to be more detailed and specific. Remember you only have a few words to get across a lot of information don’t waste those words on statements that don’t do anything to convey what your story is.
Good luck and good writing! ?
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On the verge of?suicide, an insecure teen?is?expected to care for her alcoholic father during a quarentine but when?her father is forced to spend time in close quarters with her polyamorous lovers she must keep the peace to keep them safe and inside before one, or all, of them break out of the apt complex and become exposed to a mysterious illness.
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The worst flu outbreak in years is spreading like wildfire, prompting citizens all over the world to be quarentined, and leaving a young girl to keep the peace between her father and her polyamorous lovers inside their apt complex prison.
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