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  1. Posted: July 2, 2017In: SciFi

    Vowlence- In the year 2050, matrimony’s perfect success rate is challenged when a “created” spouse falls for someone other than her creator and falls in love with having a choice.

    DJhasMS Logliner
    Added an answer on July 11, 2017 at 1:35 am

    While a clearly defined goal is appreciated, it seems you're on your way to a very interesting story already. This LogLine has irony and cost, but fails to define a specific audience. If I knew who this was being marketed too I may have a different view on it's relevance. Good luck and good writing!

    While a clearly defined goal is appreciated, it seems you’re on your way to a very interesting story already.

    This LogLine has irony and cost, but fails to define a specific audience. If I knew who this was being marketed too I may have a different view on it’s relevance.

    Good luck and good writing!

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