1. Posted: February 24, 2016In:

    When an injured photographer believes he?s witnessed a murder, he must overcome his limited mobility and cooperate with his girlfriend to bring the killer to justice.

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    Ed Vassie Penpusher

    Thanks Nir, replacing "injured" with "wheelchair bound" could achieve this.

    Thanks Nir, replacing “injured” with “wheelchair bound” could achieve this.

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  2. Posted: February 24, 2016In:

    Son of an Indian couple – who deeply believes in Gandhian ideals of nonviolence, accidentally kills a powerful man to protect his father. While the family on run, the son and father fiercely stands against each other?s way to fight out the enemy.

    Ed Vassie Penpusher

    I think there is a great story here, but there is too much going on in this logline. If you focus on why the family is going on the run and what their goal is, the father and son's conflict will have greater weight. Try a variation on: When [x happens] a son must overcome his father's pacifist naturRead more

    I think there is a great story here, but there is too much going on in this logline. If you focus on why the family is going on the run and what their goal is, the father and son’s conflict will have greater weight. Try a variation on: When [x happens] a son must overcome his father’s pacifist nature in order to guide his family to [x]. Great story here! Happy writing!

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  3. Posted: August 14, 2015In:

    When the suicide of Trent Warner is discovered, a group of his friends must fulfill his dying wish by delivering 100 letters he composed before his suicide, in doing so they will discover that Trent Warner?s death is not as simple as the police report makes it out to be.

    Ed Vassie Penpusher

    I agree that the name of the Trent Warner character is not so important and shouldn't dominate the logline. The major conflict is the uncovering of the truth behind his death and this should be the main focus. Love the premise.

    I agree that the name of the Trent Warner character is not so important and shouldn’t dominate the logline. The major conflict is the uncovering of the truth behind his death and this should be the main focus. Love the premise.

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