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  1. Posted: March 20, 2013In: Public

    After a horrific accident, two quarreling lovers are left in a comatose state. Not knowing what had happened they must fall in love once again to be awakened.

    Dooke Starr
    Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 6:03 am

    the original concept was only one had amnesia and they didn't realise they wetter in a dream state

    the original concept was only one had amnesia and they didn’t realise they wetter in a dream state

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  2. Posted: March 15, 2013

    Accused of a crime for revenge, a sensitive, feminine male struggles to keep his sanity while incarcerated in a small town county jail fully inhabited by a variety of unpredictable strangers.

    Dooke Starr
    Added an answer on March 16, 2013 at 5:43 am

    I find the vagueness of the crime takes away from the hero. if he's sucha feminine guy then why a crime for revenge. concepts are there i just find the choice of "revenge" too vague. Otherwise it feels like it's on the right track what might work "crime of passion a sensitive guy... " sets up that hRead more

    I find the vagueness of the crime takes away from the hero. if he’s sucha feminine guy then why a crime for revenge. concepts are there i just find the choice of “revenge” too vague. Otherwise it feels like it’s on the right track

    what might work “crime of passion a sensitive guy… ” sets up that hes not overly macho yet articulates the crime was fitting to him for his actions

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  3. Posted: March 15, 2013In: Public

    After the gruesome murder of his wife, a man takes the only logical choice he has; become the monster that destroyed his life. wearing the faces of his victims, the town goes into a frenzy to figure out who is the man behind the masks.

    Dooke Starr
    Added an answer on March 15, 2013 at 7:23 am

    by stating it was a logical choice was more an implication of his mental state. making the statement was more a reference to the fact he had psychopathic tendencies before the murder. tried to mull it over to see howicould phrase the idea in such a way that makes sense. thanks for the mention thoughRead more

    by stating it was a logical choice was more an implication of his mental state. making the statement was more a reference to the fact he had psychopathic tendencies before the murder. tried to mull it over to see howicould phrase the idea in such a way that makes sense. thanks for the mention though! hopefully it’ll get the brain moving towards maybe a cleaner statement

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