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Horny camp counselors awaiting the arrival of their campers begin being picked off by a mysterious killer.
This logline is pretty good start. Sounds like a cool 70's horror setup. You might want to think about using one hero instead of a group and describing their goal, even if it is just to survive. The irony may need a bit of work too. Id like to see an adjective pointing to loose morals. "Horny" is moRead more
This logline is pretty good start. Sounds like a cool 70’s horror setup. You might want to think about using one hero instead of a group and describing their goal, even if it is just to survive. The irony may need a bit of work too. Id like to see an adjective pointing to loose morals. “Horny” is more of a way of thinking than an action. ” promiscuous”? Is the killer from the heros past? How can you tie it together more as a story.
See lessWhen a computer dependant family decides to go back to basics on a gadget free weekend, things take a turn for the worse when they become lost in the wilderness.
How's this? "When a workoholic father is ordered to spend more time with his disconnected, tech obsessed family, their gadget free weekend in the wilderness turns into a fight for survival against the elements far from the comforts of home"
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“When a workoholic father is ordered to spend more time with his disconnected, tech obsessed family, their gadget free weekend in the wilderness turns into a fight for survival against the elements far from the comforts of home”
See lessWhen a computer dependant family decides to go back to basics on a gadget free weekend, things take a turn for the worse when they become lost in the wilderness.
Their car rolls off a cliff, their tents and equipment are swept away by a tornado, there are attacked by bees, bears and cougars and end up in a deadly situation far from home with no food or water and no one to help. The usual survival stuff. The difference here is that they are overweight city foRead more
Their car rolls off a cliff, their tents and equipment are swept away by a tornado, there are attacked by bees, bears and cougars and end up in a deadly situation far from home with no food or water and no one to help. The usual survival stuff. The difference here is that they are overweight city folk with no concept of nature. More familiar with the tweet of twitter than the tweet of a bird they are going to have to learn fast how to survive with only each other.
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