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  1. Posted: September 5, 2018In: Student Loglines

    When their son takes his own life, his determined mother must seek out her orphaned nephew in an effort to support his dreams like she never could for her own child.

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    Added an answer on September 21, 2018 at 10:21 pm

    mrliteral: >>>Never start a logline with ?When.? Why never?? Would you care to explain?

    mrliteral:
    >>>Never start a logline with ?When.?

    Why never?? Would you care to explain?

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2018In: Horror

    As a gang-ravaged inner-city estate is torn apart by a feral beast that feeds on hate and violence, one man trying to renounce his brutal past, must make his way through the bone shattering carnage to find his daughter.

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    Added an answer on September 18, 2018 at 4:45 am

    If the creature "feeds on hate and violence" why does the daughter need rescuing?? Doesn't the creature focus on the perpetrators of hate and violence -- not the victims?? This point needs to be clarified.

    If the creature “feeds on hate and violence” why does the daughter need rescuing?? Doesn’t the creature focus on the perpetrators of hate and violence — not the victims?? This point needs to be clarified.

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  3. Posted: September 16, 2018In: Examples

    When an NYC lawyer fails to brush off his emotionally unstable one-night stand, he must protect his family from her frenzied attempts to replace them.

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    Added an answer on September 18, 2018 at 4:19 am

    Very good, Richiev.? A clever play on words (in this case, the rhetorical device of antithesis) can strengthen the impression a logline makes.However, the plot "Fatal Attraction"? ?is not about a peccant husband having to defend his family against a? woman who seeks revenge.? It's not revenge she waRead more

    Very good, Richiev.? A clever play on words (in this case, the rhetorical device of antithesis) can strengthen the impression a logline makes.

    However, the plot “Fatal Attraction”? ?is not about a peccant husband having to defend his family against a? woman who seeks revenge.? It’s not revenge she wants. She just? wants him for herself.? She’s obsessively, pathologically possessive.

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