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A dead husband waits to be reunited with his wife, but he isn’t the only one waiting.
The logline presents a story that is stuck in neutral, that doesn't get into gear and do anything, go anywhere.? What happens (the inciting incident) that gets the story into gear and moving?? And once it moves, move toward what?? What is the action, the plot?
The logline presents a story that is stuck in neutral, that doesn’t get into gear and do anything, go anywhere.? What happens (the inciting incident) that gets the story into gear and moving?? And once it moves, move toward what?? What is the action, the plot?
See lessLiving in poverty, a neglected boy discovers the power of his imagination through reading but struggles to escape the harsh realities of his abuse.
>>>power of his imagination Power to do what? >>>struggles to escape How?? What is his objective goal that will enable him to escape his harsh reality? The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn't follow through with a complete plot.? ?We don't really know, have a cleRead more
>>>power of his imagination
Power to do what?
>>>struggles to escape
How?? What is his objective goal that will enable him to escape his harsh reality?
The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn’t follow through with a complete plot.? ?We don’t really know, have a clear idea as to what the main action of the story is.
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See lessAn accomplished Nigerian scam artist, beset by his conscience after his latest victim commits suicide, decides to quit the game but there is one last score.
One last score against who, involving what?? ?Specifically,? what is his objective goal?? "One last score" is vague -- it hides the game ball.? A logline should show the game ball, not hide it; it needs to clearly state the object and/or objective that everyone is fighting over.And why? Obviously, hRead more
One last score against who, involving what?? ?Specifically,? what is his objective goal?? “One last score” is vague — it hides the game ball.? A logline should show the game ball, not hide it; it needs to clearly state the object and/or objective that everyone is fighting over.
And why? Obviously, his conscience doesn’t beset him? enough.? Why is that??The suicide doesn’t seem to qualify as an inciting incident if he keeps on doing what he was doing before .? What is the specific inciting incident that motivates him to go for one last score?
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