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Upside down in a binge, Hank Thomson loses a key that came with a cat that nobody wanted, putting his unborn child in danger; Bad luck for Hank since that cat?s key belongs to a trinity of badass’ that will kill the woman carrying his future. “So just remember, Hank!”
>>>that will kill the woman carrying his future. Isn't that a spoiler?? Something a logline should never have. I still don't understand what the overarching plot is.? I have an idea of what the bad guys want.? I have not idea of what Hank wants, what his? overarching objective goal.? And "SRead more
>>>that will kill the woman carrying his future.
Isn’t that a spoiler?? Something a logline should never have.
I still don’t understand what the overarching plot is.? I have an idea of what the bad guys want.? I have not idea of what Hank wants, what his? overarching objective goal.? And “So, just remember, Hank”? doesn’t seem to add? anything of value to the logline.
See lessUpside down in a binge, Hank Thomson loses a key that came with a cat that nobody wanted. Bad luck for Hank since that cat?s key belongs to a trio of badass Thugs, Mafioso, and dirty Detectives, bringing into focus all these sycophantic sociopath?s violent requirement for what Hank possesses.
So we know what the bad guys want? What does the good guy want?? What is his objective goal?? A plot is supposed to be driven by the objective goal of the protagonist --not the antagonist.Also, check out the formula page for guidelines on how to build an industry acceptable logline in terms of the pRead more
So we know what the bad guys want? What does the good guy want?? What is his objective goal?? A plot is supposed to be driven by the objective goal of the protagonist –not the antagonist.
Also, check out the formula page for guidelines on how to build an industry acceptable logline in terms of the plot.
See lessA psychiatrist on the verge of suicide is haunted by a ghost who shows him that the way to his own happiness is through the suffering of his clients.
Agree with mikepedley85.? Using a ghost for the inciting incident? feels like contrived, convenient, a deus ex machina m.o. to kick off the plot.? I think the core premise would work better if the inciting incident arises organically from character rather than contrivance.?Which should be easy enougRead more
Agree with mikepedley85.? Using a ghost for the inciting incident? feels like contrived, convenient, a deus ex machina m.o. to kick off the plot.? I think the core premise would work better if the inciting incident arises organically from character rather than contrivance.?
Which should be easy enough to do . For example, in a depressed mood the shrink unintentionally gives bad advice to a client.? On the next visit, when the client informs him it only made his life more miserable, the shrink experiences schadenfreude and a lifting of his depression.? The depression returns and isn’t lifted until the next time? he finds out his advice unintentionally made matters worse.? This sets the psychological hook in his mind that motivates him to intentionally give bad advice.? ?Comedy and complications ensue.
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