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  1. Posted: April 6, 2020In: Horror

    After receiving a private invite to compete,? five amateur cooks find themselves trapped by elite cannibals and must cook to win in order to survive.

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    Added an answer on April 7, 2020 at 3:41 am

    Cook what?? Human flesh?? Vegan fare??? I'm guessing the former, but I shouldn't have to guess, particularly since that is (probably) the story hook.? And if it is, it's a good one.? So flaunt it, don't conceal it.And what does not "surviving" entail.? More cannibalism?? Again, please clarify.

    Cook what?? Human flesh?? Vegan fare??? I’m guessing the former, but I shouldn’t have to guess, particularly since that is (probably) the story hook.? And if it is, it’s a good one.? So flaunt it, don’t conceal it.

    And what does not “surviving” entail.? More cannibalism?? Again, please clarify.

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2020In: Horror

    An overnight caregiver and a bored stiff succubus form an unlikely alliance to launch a dark web speed dating site.

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    Added an answer on April 4, 2020 at 4:59 am

    Why would the two form an unlikely alliance?? What's the shared goal in their relationship? And why must the dating site be on the dark side of the web?? What is it doing that 's? evil and illegal?

    Why would the two form an unlikely alliance?? What’s the shared goal in their relationship?

    And why must the dating site be on the dark side of the web?? What is it doing that ‘s? evil and illegal?

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  3. Posted: March 25, 2020In: Adventure

    On the cusp of the 23rd century,? our world has almost completely succumbed to global warming, forcing all inhabitants to live in one giant, multi-cultured community. Racism, greed, destruction, and chaos run amok with no end in sight. Every citizen is forced to pick up weapons to either slaughter or protect. A young adult and his best friend enlist in a government-owned team of fighters, whose main goal is to stop the spread of corruption and save humanity from the brink of extinction.

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    Added an answer on March 26, 2020 at 2:30 am

    Agree with yqwertz on every point.Particularly the point about the protagonist being described in general terms.? He comes across as a generic combo Savior/SJW (- Social Justice Warrior).? What distinguishes him from all the other scripts and story ideas about would-be Saviors?? (And there plenty ofRead more

    Agree with yqwertz on every point.

    Particularly the point about the protagonist being described in general terms.? He comes across as a generic combo Savior/SJW (- Social Justice Warrior).? What distinguishes him from all the other scripts and story ideas about would-be Saviors?? (And there plenty of them in loglines posted here.)? What’s his mojo, what makes him uniquely qualified, humanity’s best and only hope to avoid extinction?

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